Lonely Musings

Lonely Musings

A Poem by jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)

my heart

longs for your touch

my inner wellsprings slowly receding

further

with each fresh rebuff

each new denial...


i forget, now,

what it felt like

to be desired

and touched

with the warm open palm

that says

you are worthy of love

© 2009 jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)


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Oh my friend how these words go deep into the inner self..and tell of fears
Iong for your touch ,been a long while now ,think my inner well springs are receding
I think they are going dry by the days,they forget how it was.how it felt like
to be desired and touched to feel the warm of your hands,the love in your eyes
how they used to give me life..give me love ,give me all the happiness I need..to live
lovely write..

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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A heartfelt write that is a question that most of us have asked at one time or another. Orlando is pot on that one. The only answer is the truth that every human being is worthy of love. That means you as well, never forget! Very nice! ~ Jude :-)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I reckon you capture the way a lot of us become as we get a little older and have been love-clawed more than once. We learn to be wary and our capacity to love is less free and adventurous. This does not mean it is lost, just less inclined to leap in at the first hint of being requited.


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh my friend how these words go deep into the inner self..and tell of fears
Iong for your touch ,been a long while now ,think my inner well springs are receding
I think they are going dry by the days,they forget how it was.how it felt like
to be desired and touched to feel the warm of your hands,the love in your eyes
how they used to give me life..give me love ,give me all the happiness I need..to live
lovely write..

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I know these feelings all to well
Lovely written

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)
jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)

Vancouver, BC, Canada



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