She lusts for words, aching for newer
and more profound meaning in her
repertoire.
"Wordlust" captures the reader. Her
gift delivers rapture in a talented
profusion of sounds, painted in to a
gift, designed and delivered on a plate
of flowers to please every reader.
whew! your words drip and swirl and crunch and flow, flow oh so good, a juxtapose of taste and sexuality, sensuality, ecumenical starshine, i really dig this.
She lusts for words, aching for newer
and more profound meaning in her
repertoire.
"Wordlust" captures the reader. Her
gift delivers rapture in a talented
profusion of sounds, painted in to a
gift, designed and delivered on a plate
of flowers to please every reader.
A perfect place to post this poem, as so many on here feel this lust for words that you have described perfectly. The words interlock and create a beautiful flow, it just rolls off the tongue in way a good write should. "upon the silken pale hue of my flesh
to soak them in, osmosis-like," Clever line.
ohh those words hits me soft,delicious and sweet ,my mouth wet
and i am whole,i grab a pen and put them to words that stirred me all
oh they spread like cream on silk of my flesh,and i soak them in
consume them nourish over them,they carve across my ribs
like a shell or so fitting clothes hung onto me,plastered and will never go
lovely and sweet ,and exciting all through
lovely write
Man...I need a cold glass of water. Wow. This poem is um.....wow.
Da um..yeah..This poem is great! You used the perfect words and
built some of the best depictions I've ever seen. I loved it.
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Truly creative expressions of the power of words and how we can lust for them. Yes this is extremely sensual, with images that are enticing. I love this part, "Oh to spread them like cream, upon the silken pale hue of my flesh" Fanning myself, I can't comment any more on that. LOL One of my favorite poems very nicely composed and delivered.
Playful and eager to explore new styles of writing, and to hone my skills. i'm reaching a point now where i can write a poem and be able to say that it is something i really like. I'm an avid reader, .. more..