diminutive wishes.

A Poem by jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)

i am relinquishing my heart

for you to take..

your new hermitcrab abode

it's one from which i hope

you'll never grow out of

© 2010 jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)

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alan peter kelly

one (from which)
i hope
you never outgrow

lovely poem..just thought id make the suggestion :)

Posted 13 Years Ago

Ed Hart

who gets to keep the remote for the claws

Posted 13 Years Ago

FireFly15

This was very interesting to read, keep up the good work!

100/100

Posted 13 Years Ago

Pax Analog

Ha, another miniature delight!

This poem summons a fluid animation in mind's-eye, a soul-whimsical "moving day." ;-)

And the afterglow is a fetching blend of romanticism, humor, and pragmatic affirmation.

Charming!

Posted 13 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Crowley

Damnation sistah....you are on the roll of rolls today....Your heart has been a big as I have ever seen one. I think we all feel your blood pumping through your words. Bravo....

Posted 13 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on September 9, 2010
Last Updated on October 14, 2010

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jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)

Vancouver, BC, Canada

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Playful and eager to explore new styles of writing, and to hone my skills. i'm reaching a point now where i can write a poem and be able to say that it is something i really like. I'm an avid reader, .. more..