this morning.

i woke
a remnant of a dream
still drifting its memory 
across my lips

a kiss undelivered
trembling, fragile and newborn, 
held captive upon a mouth
still waiting to be claimed

Reviews

[Amberlight]

. . . so simple but still, your words drift lightly across the page - leaving blank spaces to ponder the moment and the feelings.

[Crowley]

Damn...claim that thing would ya....what a great image, I found this to be a super romantic write...sorry I didn't get here before this.

[SpokenWord]

Snooze button will help fix that back to dream land to complete that kiss.