Lake of fire!

just a description off a picture of hell

    

   There is  a lake of fire,
Beneath our land,
The tormented souls that have been lost,
It's called the pit's of Hell,
The smell of rotting away flesh,
People damned for their souls,
All that has been lost,
No turning back now,
Can't be forgiven once your in Hell,
Into a lake of fire,
Oh how so many souls have been lost,
There is a beast,
A beast o so Evil and mean,
He is a dragon,
The eyes so dark,
He will tortured you,
For you are being punished for your sins,
The smell of brimstone,
The flesh eating away,
The regret from your sins,
Shoved right into your face,
Flash backs of all that you have done,
All the evil,
Punished to Hell.

Author's Note

let me know what you think of this poem

Reviews

[TPK Stories]

Excellent description of hell will be like...thought I don't think anyone can fully comprehend what hell will be like...you captured hell in your own words...

[Laura Lynn]

I'm glad there is a hell to threaten us, otherwise we might loose hope in living, though we need a little firelight from time to time. Maybe hell is in Hawaii with the Vulcans

[LadyNaida]

Is a very real place for those that chose to follow the path of unrighteousness.

[Malister Mikey]

I really liked this poem and I'm going to say now, I don't really have a belief in such a place as I believe God is a part of all living things, though I still liked this poem it is well done and fits the description many think hell to be.

Sincerely, Malister Mikey

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice description of hell. I believe real hell will be worst. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Confuser]

I liked it; it's a very scarey place you describe. I found myself thinking I don't want to go there. Very descriptive - thanks so much!

[jennifer little]

your welcome and thanks for reviewing and reading

[Author Rucha Joshi]

Hellish! Again the same feels!
I liked this one too!

[wordman]

well maybe your write might help to keep people out

[GoGo Tamago]

I don't even like talking about it. It just creeps me out, the subject. this is a good poem. and sorry, I just can't or don't like to hear about something as awful as this. I just don't like the word, and it doesn't mean this isn't a good poem. It is, not that I really care what you write about. You can still write about it, and stuff like that but it seems like some people may not like hearing about it. like over religious people. I am just being considerate about how they feel.

[jennifer little]

thanks for the review and actully of what ive heard of what hell will be like is why ive been writing these poems my dads a penicostal preacher real religouse and ive heard stories about hell and stuff and it wont be very plesent just trying to get a point of view out there

[GoGo Tamago]

True, very true. I see your point.

[M.A.Rathore]

The poem reminds me of the description of hell by John Milton in his book,"Paradise Lost".
This is really a great matter of concern whether we have to be more polite in our crimes that we do commit now and then ,knowingly and with planning. This piece will chech us doing bad actions... As usual your language is superb and with a nice flow of emotions.
Please do comment on my recent poem "PLEASE GIVE ME BIRTH MY MOM..
Have a nice time..