Wilderness rains

Wilderness rains

A Poem by jennifer little
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its just another love poem hope you like it there is two versions let me know if you like the first or second one better

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    first version 
    Walking through the wilderness rains, 
So much to explore , 
So little time ,
Oh baby come join me, 
Let's take a walk through the wilderness rains, 
Let's dance upon the stars, 
Kiss upon the moon light , 
Lay upon the midnight stars , 
For ever i love you , 
For ever i will stay, 
Let's take this walk , 
For a journey we will find. 
     second version 
 wilderness rains, 
 as i walk through the wilderness rains, 
so much to explore, 
so little time, 
oh baby come join me, 
lets walk through the wilderness rains, 
lets dance upon the moonlight, 
lay with you in the midnight stars, 
forever i will love you, 
forever i will stay, 
lets take this walk, 
for our journey has just begun 

© 2022 jennifer little


Author's Note

jennifer little
let me know what you think
now rude commets

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Wilderness rains, that's so beautiful. Thanks for sharing your poem with me.

Posted 2 Years Ago


It’s a great theme and a beautiful image.

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Posted 6 Years Ago


Nice poem with an intimate atmosphere. I enjoyed the scenery.

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Posted 6 Years Ago


A meetup with a lover under the rain is one of the greatest joys in life. Provided they enjoi it also and don't b***h about being wet and complainy.

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Posted 7 Years Ago


Walks with your lover are what's best...enjoyed this one...

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Posted 7 Years Ago


my first review for a long time. this poem of yours is just beautiful, so beautiful that I'm missing the wilderness even more. For someone who was born and raised on the mountains, the city sucks. Thanks for sharing. ;) -olive.

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Posted 7 Years Ago


Best walks into deep forest or large mountain range.
"For ever i will stay,
Let's take this walk ,
For a journey we will find. "
I liked the above lines. Good to have company in the walk to the free forest. Thank you my friend for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

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Posted 7 Years Ago


I love the ending!
Keep it up!!

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Posted 7 Years Ago


Sweet! There is nothing like love under rain... It's a beautiful way to describe or announce the Poet's love for her beloved... Excellent...

Sincerely
Dhiman

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Posted 7 Years Ago


well it sounded like a sweet love song,dancing on the moon and stars

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Posted 7 Years Ago


jennifer little

7 Years Ago

thanks hope you enjoyed it

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Added on December 30, 2016
Last Updated on January 17, 2022

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jennifer little
jennifer little

jackson, MI



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hi im jen i am a single mother of one daughter . i struggle from ptsd depression and anxiety . from being in abusive realationships . i enjoy the outdoors , nature swimming fishing camping boat.. more..

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