The Fear Of Life

people's fears can come true

 

                The Fear Of Life!

 As i was walking by ,

I seen a terrible mean demon with five horns and sharp pointed ears,

He looked like a snake figure demon.

 He want's to come get me .

But i'm not going to let him.

I kept on walking and i start to get scared,

There are dead bodies , and skeltons everywhere

flame's of fire burning like Hell.

Then a creature of Hell pop's out with a black rob with a cape on and a hood over his head .

The demon's face was shrivled and had spikes in his forhead,

All of asuden it came to me ,

It became dark ,

dark as can be ,

I herd screaming and yelling of torchuring soul's ,

There's no way out,

HELP ME !

HELP US PLEASE .

Can you here me .

 

 

 

      The End ,

 

 

 

  By : Jennifer Little

 

Author's Note

hello there spent lot's of time on my work been writieng things down since this morning at 7 am till 12 tonight i will be still writing i love to do this its fun ...
been writing my poems all day fun
hope you enjoy
give me some advice and help me out tell me if there needs to be any little change at all give me a hint

i fixed all spelling errors and grammer

Reviews

[M. J. Smith]

Dreadful images. Read around a campfire, ain't nobody would sleep that night.
Sometimes, our demons Chase us our entire lives. Always one step behind. Only grace can help us win such desperate races.

[jennifer little]

thanks for the review

[misscb]

Well this was really intense... Well done!!!

[Marie]

You do have quite an imagination. You only need to work on your spelling and punctuation.