Dear MY Love !!!!

it's a love poem

   Dear My Love,

Your eyes they are like stars so bright,

I’m thinking of you day and night,

Please come closer, I won’t bite,

We could sit together by a candle light.

Kiss me quick hold me tight,

I want to be your Jedi knight,

I’m Amidala and you’re my Jedi knight,

Don’t keep me waiting until fall,

You are the cutest one of all,

If I had your number,

Every day I would call,

Your love hit me like a cannon ball,

I can’t think of anything else at all,

I’m desperately waiting for your call,

I can’t think of anything else at all, I’ll surely love your until fall,

When we talk,

I can tell you all,

Don’t keep me waiting until fall,

You are the cutest one of all,

And I’ll surely never fall.

 

The end,

BY: Jennifer little

Author's Note

i say this is a wonderful love poem

Reviews

[Thea]

This has a really good rhyme scheme...Nicely written and so sweet.
:)))

[Marie]

From what I've read of your poems, I'd say you have a boyfriend who is"the cutest one of all."

[Eleanor]

I loved the flow. Great job
-Eleanor

[misscb]

Your flow was really on point on this... Well done!!!

[~Lizzy♬]

Yes, it is a wonderful love poem. I love your rhyming. :)

~Lizzy~