life's a dream world !!!!

it's about our dreams

    Life’s a dream world,

 

   Life’s a dream,

We all have dreams,

Dreams can be visions of something that’s going to happen,

Most dreams come true,

Most dreams don’t come true,

Who are we to talk?

Who are we to judge?

There will be a day that you will be judge upon your sins,

Dreams are visions of life and death,

We all can have them come true,

Life, death,

Love, joy,

Peace, honor,

We all have a dream world of fun,

We have dreams of horror,

We have dreams of death,

We have good dreams,

We have happy dreams,

And well whatever other kind of dreams we have.

The end,

By: Jennifer little

Author's Note

we all love , we all die, we all have peace and joy , we all have dreams
tell me what you think

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

We need hope and dreams. Keep us from becoming just animals.
"Life, death,
Love, joy,
Peace, honor,
We all have a dream world of fun, "
Sometime hope and dreams are all we have. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Maria.F.T]

This is so great, I love every single word on this poem..but I found a grammatical error on the 9th line...so please fix it...thanks for sharing your great poem :)

[Try-to-Smile]

a nice well done poem!!

[Eleanor]

Nice...I really liked it
-Eleanor

[jimmy]

A dream is something in life we all have to go through no matter what. Whether it's when you're sleeping or something you actually want to gain, it's a dream. Dreams can be achieved or broken. This was a very nice poem you've got here, and I really think you're a great writer so far. ^_^ Good job with this one.

[Marie]

Yes, we all have dreams, but I don't think they tell the future; they tell of the future we want to happen.

[ATG]

A very interesting and well written poem about dreams.

[misscb]

This was really nice... Well done!!!