oh baby!!!

love poem .....

Oh baby,

Oh baby,

I feel you so much,

I feel your love,

You’re the greatest one of all,

I’m glad I met you,

Darling, our love is simply divine,

Let’s go somewhere nice to dine,

I’ll do anything for you baby,

Babe, I believe our loves no crime,

How I wish I could be yours forever,

And ever until we die together,

With you I feel so very fine,

You are my little porcupine,

When I saw you for the very first time I felt a connection, and knew that we will stay together forever,

Live together forever,

Live happy forever,

And love until the day is gone.

Baby, quick kiss me, hold me tight,

For I will love you forever,

Now good night.

The end,

By: Jennifer little

Author's Note

i think this is a good poem !!!!!!!!

Reviews

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Wow, so sentimental, I enjoyed this write.

[Hannah Paige]

I like the passion in this, but the form and rhyme scheme feel inconsistent and forced. I feel like you could include some more complex emotions and ideas in order to further develop this piece.