Looking into the stars!!!

well this is a poem i was working on earlyer typing out and decided to stop and work on somthing else so i hope you enjoy this poem

Looking into the stars!

　

I look into the stars,

I see my self in the sky,

I want to fly high,

Oh gee,

How i wish i could just fly away,

And live wonderlussly upon the sky,

I look up into the you’r eyes,

I see a frightened little girl,

Oh how I feel so ashamed,

That little girl was me,

I seen myself in this cruel place,

This cruel world,

living upon people,

cruel,

mean,

sensational people,

Love,

Sex,

Rock,

And Roll,

I don’t see this upon my eyes,

I wonder through the sky,

Trying to find answers,

And hope,

Dream,

Can’t my dreams come true,

Oh how i wish people could understand,

It’s night right,

It’s not right to pick on a poor little girl,

My mind is wondering upon the stars,

My mind is wondering,

Wonderussly blank,

Wonderlussly criuse of this world,

our world is dark, and gray,

Full of cruel,

Cruel people.

The end,

　

BY:Jennifer Little

Author's Note

it's a poem .,... don't really know how to explain it but i love this poem its really awsome i see my self looking upon this stars thinking of all these things .....
well i hope you enjoy this poem and let me know what you think

Reviews

[Pencrafter]

This is a cute poem. I was wondering, did you mean 'wandering'? Our mind and imagination sometimes wanders. Interesting verse.
Nice job.

[Tomislav Petricevic]

Good rhythm! Great job.

[AK]

Wonderful write! I loved it!

[Ashton Blake]

it was a good poem.................................not too shabby

[misscb]

Loved how deep you made it... That's what made it such a good write... Great job... Well done!!!

[Careless Whispers ._.]

i love it..it comes from ur heart

[TPK Stories]

Good write...good job....

[Missy Moooooo]

Awesome :)

[Kenneth The Poet]

Interesting write.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I did enjoy the poem . You say, let me know what you think, i think the poem is nice - the explantion marks behind the title are not even necessary to show your enthusiasm for star- gazing.