Summer !!!

well this is another poem i wrote when i was 17 years old year 2009 ..... I made changes to it a lot its use to be really short made it longer

Summer ,

As I walk along the outside and the season's keep on changing so fast,

I look up into the sky, and see the clouds go by,

I hear the bird's chirping,

I see people swimming,

And it's really hot out,

Must be summer time again,

That was fast seems like just yesterday it was spring,

Time to have lot's of fun,

Jump into the water and go swimming,

Time to go fishing,

And boating,

Time to go kayaking, and much much more things,

I run and jump,

I lay down and look at the sunny sky,

beautiful clouds going by,

I say thank you God for all the seasons that go by,

I look upon the stars at night,

I hold your hand tight,

As I lay upon the night sky and say I love you,

Summer time is so much fun,

You hear the kids screaming, and yelling having so much fun,

I can't believe It's summer time again.

The end,

BY: Jennifer Little

Author's Note

well let me know what you think........ give me some review s hope you like it and enjoy it i got much much more poems comeing i have my funny kids poems i wrote out and getting ready to type them all out and see what happens from there

Reviews

[Angelic Surrender]

Nice work :)

[paradise]

ashh summer goytaa love it and this poem about it

[TPK Stories]

I hear ya...can't wait for summertime to be here....being outdoors....

[olla]

very nice.. the innocence of summer days and the promise of summer love..

[EMMIE]

it gives a warm and sweet feeling

[CrimsonBlaze]

Aw, yes! It reminds me of summer, the warmth and many more elements that you incorlporated into the poem. Nice job!

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I like this, once again you bring nature into the poem nicely.

[Coyote Poetry]

Summer bring out hope and dream of warm days and pleasure. To wander down a beach with free time and opportunity to enjoy life. Thank you for the positive poem of Summer. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Roe]

Really beautiful

[Brantwijn]

I like all the details about summertime that you have included in this. Good job!