voices

Voices, voices, voices in my head

making me doubt

making me dread

help me i need some rest

a relief not a kick in the teeth.

 

All you need to do is sing sing

sing out loud

do something to make someone proud.

 

these days all i hear is money this

money that

but that wont bring the innocence back

theres warped thinking all over this town

i just cant bear to see another frown

 

we have one life, one life, one life to live

so quit this blood for oil

its just too much turmoil.

 

All you need to do is sing sing

sing out loud

do something to make someone proud.

Author's Note

yet another peice im working on. hope its message is clear.

Reviews

[Nirego]

I really enjoyed this up until it got political. I think you should have continued to focus on the personal struggle.

Really nice use of the rule of three - has a great impact.

[jess foreman]

Thank you.