Love

Love

A Poem by jesserose99
"

just love

"
Sugar sweet
can't compete
feel the heat
of love on fire

It bows, it bends,
it burns, it wins
it forgives sins
this love sweet love

© 2015 jesserose99


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Jesse,
From the warmth of your sparkling stardust ink, there dances across, down, and up off the page into the gentle places within this bard's mind, heart, and soul, reflecting the tender knowing of yours.
I love the imaginative imagery and sensations that flow from your words to touch the senses, how smooth and seamless your lines flow into each other, forming verses that sweep one away … hallmarks of a master poetess.

Yes, "love, sweet love", indeed! A most brilliant little piece, Lovely Lady-Poet!
Thank you, ever-so warmly and gratefully, for the endearing moment you've shared! ⁓ Richard


100/100

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jesserose99

4 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind review...trying to get the flow right is always a concern of mind so I appre.. read more
Richard 🍃

4 Years Ago

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I'm thinking that you really nailed this one.

In eight lines, you packaged what it is that many seek - a sweet heat, an ultimate passion - one that yields and flows as it equally demands and directs. The conciseness of it begs to ask why we would complicate such purity.

Thank for this. So nicely done.

Posted 3 Years Ago


jesserose99

3 Years Ago

Thanks Tangent! I appreciate your saying so.:)
Yes, it does. We forgive and forget, change the rules and move the goalposts for love, and never mind doing it for love. If only we could be so forgiving in all of lifes arena.
Superbly written. Soft and delicate wisdom of one who knows :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jesserose99

3 Years Ago

Thanks for that, so nice to hear. :)
Jesse,
From the warmth of your sparkling stardust ink, there dances across, down, and up off the page into the gentle places within this bard's mind, heart, and soul, reflecting the tender knowing of yours.
I love the imaginative imagery and sensations that flow from your words to touch the senses, how smooth and seamless your lines flow into each other, forming verses that sweep one away … hallmarks of a master poetess.

Yes, "love, sweet love", indeed! A most brilliant little piece, Lovely Lady-Poet!
Thank you, ever-so warmly and gratefully, for the endearing moment you've shared! ⁓ Richard


100/100

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jesserose99

4 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind review...trying to get the flow right is always a concern of mind so I appre.. read more
Richard 🍃

4 Years Ago

How pleasurably my visit has been here with you … you are most welcome, and I thank you with great.. read more
A lovely sweet take on love and its tricks! A lovely share!

Posted 4 Years Ago



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jesserose99
jesserose99

lakewood, CO



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I am a tarot reader and numerologist, who loves to write poetry. I also write songs and love to sing and play guitar. I love art too, so clearly I just have a passion for creativity. Also love my dog.. more..

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