Fall to me

Fall to me

A Poem by kurama247
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A love poem

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This is a previous version of Fall to me.



Your tears fall

into my shirt

then you turn

and walk away

 

say you don't need

the help I give

the shoulder you cry on

 

But you always come back

you know I'll be here

until the end of time

 

And with a kiss on you head

and my deapest wish

you pain will leave...

I never mind.

 

Everytime you fall

fall into my arms

and I swear to God

I'll catch you.

© 2009 kurama247


Author's Note

kurama247
Funny thing about this poem... I'm athiest.



Reviews

This was sweet. It's funny that you mention that you are an athiest as I am, too and that's the only line in your poem I didn't enjoy. Why did you write it? Where you trying to contradict yourself?

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