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My Dearest Friend
Down by the pond use to be my favorite walk. It was where me and the Lord,would always have our talk. On day's where I thought the day would never end I would go for a walk with my dearest friend.
Alway's a comfort, my troubles would fade away. He would turn my darkest into the brightest day. But then somehow those days came to a sudden end and it feels like Iv'e lost my best friend.
I know he's still waiting on my return and if I know him, his arms are open with concern. I don't know how I let myself drift astray, away from my dearest friend who has been there every day. I feel so low for putting him aside when his life he gave for me, Yes, the day he died. I know he forgives me because He loves me so much and with that in mind I'm getting back in touch. In touch with my friend who with him there is no end. An everlasting love is He and so much more. He's the one true friend who's too precious to ignore...
What an adorable little review or statement can't describe it as a poem as it wouldn't really do it justice, an overflowing emotional outpouring of human love and devotion to god perhaps might be more apt.
Thanks for sharing with me and the other members on this site i think this is wonderful and i for my part am in the same boat i have strayed from the flock and now i find myself in the dark zone of terror.
A wonderful prayer but really not my favorite kind of poetry. However, please do not let that discourage you from posting here, that is just my opinion and you know what is said about opinions---