Justify

   Is it really necessary to keep one within your reach and never out of sight? Is it wrong for me to look to the left instead of to the right?

    Was I designed to walk in the footprints in which you so gracefully lay? To live to your every command, only to obey.

      Does my life consists to everyone elses except my very own?  Is this the way I'm suppose to feel? next to nothing, simply alone.

      Can you justify someone treating another so wrong? When that person just wants to fit it, just wants to belong.

      Wanting to be loved by someone, needing it so much. To feel the warmth of anothers touch.

       So how does one justify not recieving the smallest of all this? These are things that a woman should never have to miss...

 

          

Reviews

[THE LOST ROSE]

I am not as concern with the layout as T. Love mention but the words are amazing. Your style and rhyming pattern are traditional in form but your heart and your straight forward approach makes this poem special. I like your touch!

[talulu love]

its good but u should make it look like a poem it looks like a paragraph

but otherwise good job