Saturday

actively aware
of every atom
and strand of hair
seeking peace
in these absent streets
listening
to the absent beats
of my heart
and feet

Reviews

[deleted]

I agree with Coyote.....much said in few words...nice poem!

[j.l. luna]

Thank you!!

[deleted]

Your welcome

[Coyote Poetry]

You said a lot in the short poem. The short statements open the door to question and place. Each line asking question and create vision and thoughts. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[j.l. luna]

Wow, thank you so kindly. xx

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.