An Unforgettable Best Friend

I dedicate this poem to my friends back in Manila..Aww..I miss you guys..

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An Unforgettable Best Friend

Unexpected person that comes to your life

Might give you some obligations and obstacles

That you have to fight

Hard to find, difficult to leave

And mostly, impossible to forget

I don’t know how to bring back the old times

The time when we all laugh

And the time that we all share secrets

Oh, I hope God might give me another chance

So I can barely set my wings free.

To stay with all of you and bring back the past

Is what we’ll all do when we get to the last

We’ll help each other find the best way

And give ways if we ever need to.

Make each other happy

In order to make a stronger relationship too

But it will always not end in a happy ending

We also need to bid our last good byes

I hate to start this but we have to be strong

And share our memories as our life goes on.

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Author's Note

Please tell me what to change and correct. Thanks! :)

Reviews

[bianca]

wow. your friends are very luck about you. you're very talented.

[Dev]

Aww loved it.. Friendship is a treasured gift and you managed to reflect that in you write very well !! Good job !!

[Therene]

Beautifully written. :D

You managed to encapsulate a topic to diverse in a short poem. I salute you for that.

"Distance makes the heart grow fonder." :)

Good job!

[The Analog Kid]

Real nice. I don't see much I would change. Sometimes as you read it over time, you see a word here you drop or add. Very sweet.

Write on,

Patrick

[Huggy Bear]

This is a brilliant piece about best friends. Great Job:)

[Camille Corbett]

"Hard to find, difficult to forget"
That is a beautiful line.The rest of it was rubbish, but this line made up for it. I see some promise! Try to make more lines like these and your writing will be fantastic!

[jhed]

Thanks! :)

[Sexy P3nguin]

I don't think anything should be changed. It is a really nice write, it has nice flow and a cute story. We all have friends like this and I think many of us can relate to this poem.
100/100