Symptoms of You (a poem)

Symptoms of You (a poem)

A Poem by Joshua Donahue
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a poem about the effects of someone you have fallen for (please read 'Note for Reviewers' below!)

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*Please see 'Note for Reviewers' for the ORIGINAL writer's name. It's NOT me.
Symptoms of You
(a poem)

 


There a good kind of pain

And insane kind of sane

When I’m around you

 

When I’m around you

There’s a chill in the heat

Feel the sky in my feet cuz I adore you

I can’t ignore you

 

I'm not ill

I don't need to

Take a pill

To fix what you do

Cure can come through

Cuz all I do is suffer from

The symptoms of you

 

There’s a left kinda right

There’s a blind kinda sight

Looking at you

There is no light in the moon

And its winter in June


 

© 2011 Joshua Donahue


Author's Note

Joshua Donahue
Okay. I've been getting a little heat for not posting the writer's name, so here is her name: Lindsay Lohan. Sorry, it took me a little while to find out it was her. But it's her writing. :) a song, i think. But all rights go to her. NOT ME.
PLEASE NOTE: i did not write this. i just liked it so much that i thought i would post it for you guys! but i wish i had wrote it. it's a great piece!

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if someone else wrote it you HAVE to include in there the name of the Author otherwise it is stealing.. because someone can come along & say oh i wrote it.. or put it as Author Unknown. Great poem but you need to find the name of the person who wrote it & add it in there! I swear if someone else posted my poems without my name i'd be upset.. just a word to the wise.. :)

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i recognized the song and i dont even like lohan haha.

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her word play is unique~ and very clever~

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Hmm ok I see this isn't yours but I have to say it's kind of nice! I quite like the title very much, in fact it's almost enough to make me inspired to write something different, only using the same title.

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amazing peice

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

oh wow... never heard this before but it sure was amazing.


it sounded like a song all along as i read.


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Sorry no heat lol just slight pressure! lol Take Care Joshua! lol i'm sorry for squeezing you a bit! :D wow Lindsay Lohan hey! COOOOL! She did good! Just finished watching a movie about her.. Confessions of a Teenage Drama Queen

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if someone else wrote it you HAVE to include in there the name of the Author otherwise it is stealing.. because someone can come along & say oh i wrote it.. or put it as Author Unknown. Great poem but you need to find the name of the person who wrote it & add it in there! I swear if someone else posted my poems without my name i'd be upset.. just a word to the wise.. :)

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Who did write it?

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Oh, this piece is genius with the contrasts! I absolutely loved it, and can see why you did too!

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Added on July 18, 2010
Last Updated on June 16, 2011
Tags: symtoms, of, you, love, pill, effects, romance, relationship, control, obsessed
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