rainbow puddles

rainbow puddles

A Poem by Jeff Loquist
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the sky opened
          for a moment
and spilled moonlight
          on puddles
making rainbows
           against dark water
and I smiled
           when the sky closed
hiding rainbows
           that I guess
were meant
           for my eyes only

© 2010 Jeff Loquist


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So short, but so beautiful and atmospheric. I love it!

Posted 9 Years Ago


I often experience a moment of wonder such as this and I feel as if it were meant for me alone...a message from the sky, from nature itself.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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emily
said
it
all
oh
so
beautifully

Posted 10 Years Ago


such enchantment~ magikal inside the smile of delight framed by innocence always there for us to catch with a simple step outside the frame with arms stretched to the wonders of the world~

Posted 10 Years Ago


for your eyes and the moon and the rainbows

maybe you needed that smile

not everybody that writes poetry understands the power of the word, but you do

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Jeff Loquist
Jeff Loquist

Baton Rouge, LA



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