Noah Rose
A Book by Joey Calvo
 Noah Rose, an 11 year old girl has started off pretty rough. Her mom doesn't believe in her dream of being a sailor. Luckily, Milo is here to help. With the two of them together, anything is possible.  © 2015 Joey Calvo
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I love the name Milo (I have a character named Milo) and I loved his way of speaking! Overall great story and characters. I would love some back story to add context to some aspects of the story. Oh, I'm not sure if a 16 year old would swear when talking to an 11 year old. I'm intrigued by the story and wold love to read more! Keep up the excellent work!
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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8 Years Ago
Actually, it's Milo's father swearing at him rather than Noa...but perhaps I should've made that mor.. read moreActually, it's Milo's father swearing at him rather than Noa...but perhaps I should've made that more clear. Thank's for the input and I will definitely be adding more chapters soon!
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8 Years Ago
Great! Sorry about the confusion.
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I love the name Milo (I have a character named Milo) and I loved his way of speaking! Overall great story and characters. I would love some back story to add context to some aspects of the story. Oh, I'm not sure if a 16 year old would swear when talking to an 11 year old. I'm intrigued by the story and wold love to read more! Keep up the excellent work!
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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8 Years Ago
Actually, it's Milo's father swearing at him rather than Noa...but perhaps I should've made that mor.. read moreActually, it's Milo's father swearing at him rather than Noa...but perhaps I should've made that more clear. Thank's for the input and I will definitely be adding more chapters soon!
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8 Years Ago
Great! Sorry about the confusion.
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Added on May 12, 2015
Last Updated on May 13, 2015
Tags: noah, rose, milo, eugene, sailor, artisan, 16, 11, fiction, girl
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Joey Calvo
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Novice fiction writer who enjoys novels and poetry. Hoping I can finish one of my works someday. more..
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