She

She

A Poem by Joie Richardson

It was the 4th year today

I still couldn't believe she was gone

she was the only reason

Id write my love songs

I remember playing guitar

and her singing along

and I never even noticed

anything was wrong

I walked to her house

one summer afternoon

I walked through the door

 and into her room

I saw what I saw

so I fell to the floor crying

the biggest part of my life was gone

I felt myself dying

I called an ambulance

but it wouldn't change a thing

I should have got their sooner

ill never again here her sing

for now I'll stand by your tombstone

but you better make room

because I've waited long enough

so I'll see you again soon

© 2015 Joie Richardson


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Joie Richardson
I know this isn't the best so any tips would be great!

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This is so sad, I hope this hasn't actually happened to you. The words and flow is good, good piece. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Joie Richardson

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much! This didn't happen exactly but a lot of it is based off actual things that have.. read more
Demii

9 Years Ago

I'm so sorry :( Try my contest ! "Mature writing contest" :)

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Added on March 8, 2015
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Joie Richardson
Joie Richardson

Henderson, NV



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I am a musician and lyricist. I compose music and play quite a few instruments. I love to write horror and poetry. Most of it is a little dark. Sorry about that. more..

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