Well Thank You

I really must Thank You
You may take a bow
It's you who I will pursue no mroe

You were sweet
you were kind
Especially under the sheet
I was really happy to call you mine

But something happened
You changed
It really left me stunned
You're personally, totally rearanged

You stopped caring
You started to go out
You didn't even try acting
Not even when I would shout

Even through all of this
It only made me want you more
My love is what you began to dismiss
The whole time you transformed into a w***e

I know now it wasn't love you desired
Despite all the loved I tried to Sow
It wasn't me that you ever admired
Just the pleasure you found below

But seriously, Thank You
For the Memories
For the Love
For the Lessons
For the Adventures

But what really tops the rack:
Thank you for the Reasons
To never let you come back

Reviews

[Avanthika]

small correction third line, 1st para- more, 3rd para 4th line- rearranged, loved the secnd para, well described, nice theme

[rach]

Its so hard seeing someone you love changing,
I can relate to the feeling of looking at a face you love with an unrecognisable personality,
wishing the person you fell in love with would return.

For something that must have been so hard you have written it in such a light tune.
Very enjoyable read.
Well done!

[A. Pike]

It gave me a good laugh after a rough weekend, I really liked it! It's relatable for a lot of person (unfortunately) but you write it in good humor

[Naysan arif]

this is a really good piece..:)

[Taurean X Hunter]

Beautiful poem joey. You have a way with words my man.

[micky]

Great piece but I must ask did you mean show in stanza 6 line 2 other wise I really liked the poem you wrote:)

[Joey]

It was Sow.. Like you reap what you sow

[yuki]

really great love how you thanked her for all the memories even after she left. nicely done :) and question: is it more that you were trying to spell or did you really mean mroe?