I Hate You

I Hate You

A Poem by Joey

I Hate You.
I Hate You, I Hate You, I Hate You
I Really Do Hate You
I Hate your gorgeous smile, I hate your cute laugh, I hate your perfect hair
I hate the way those eyes of yours stare
I hate the way you kiss my lips
I hate the way you hold me
I hate the way we used to mix
I hate that it's just me
I Hate the way you used to Love me
I hate this distance between us
I hate this time apart
I hate that your so far
I hate that you walked away
I hate that I couldn't make you stay
but most of all
I hate that I don't hate you.
Not Even At All

© 2014 Joey


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This is a sad piece. Love can be so fickle and it can break our hearts. I can connect with this piece. You feel like you should hate them but you are too in love with them to hate them for what they have done. A little piece of you will always love them. This was such a truthful write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Ah! The conflicts of love and relationships. Indeed, it has been said that love and hate are closely related, although in the case of your poem the character recognizes that hate masks his true feelings. Insightful poem!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sad piece, very emotion , great job :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very powerful emotion, Joey. May be Love is imagined as a child because of this quality in the emotion. Zipped me years back. Kudos!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thank you for your feedback :) I'm glad I'm able to project and communicate my feelings with everyone well enough for you guys to understand :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is a sad piece. Love can be so fickle and it can break our hearts. I can connect with this piece. You feel like you should hate them but you are too in love with them to hate them for what they have done. A little piece of you will always love them. This was such a truthful write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well, it sounds like you're in love to me. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow this is great I really like this great job :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 24, 2014
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Joey
Joey

Albuquerque, NM



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A boy, feeling stuck within his own skin, spills his heart soaking the pages in bloody ink hoping somebody will understand. more..

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