Brokenhearted fable

Brokenhearted fable

A Poem by Jolie Blossom
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Just something short I wrote a long time ago.

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Reach for the fable containing my heart,
It's cut up and torn like an old piece of art.
From times when you rented it long ago,
It collapsed in the center, burning a hole.
Now it's incomplete as it's broken from you,
And so I'll start over with a heart that is new.
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© 2012 Jolie Blossom


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Nice. I like the attitude of the poet: she doesn't just give up. That girl has heart

Posted 7 Years Ago


I love the fable analogy at the beginning...everything else falls perfectly into place from there :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Yay! You started strong and stayed strong. This is a downright professional poem. You totally rock the poetry world.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Jolie Blossom

7 Years Ago

Aww, thanks girl!! I love writing so much, it's like second nature to me... :)
lovely little write. Easy to read as flow and meter are good. Has good authority. Emotion in buckets!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Jolie Blossom

7 Years Ago

John, thank you! I wrote this probably when I was 17 or so... but I still like it. :)

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Added on September 6, 2012
Last Updated on September 6, 2012
Tags: fable, broken heart, hurt, fresh start, new, heart

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Jolie Blossom
Jolie Blossom

Latham, NY



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Heyyy Shakespeares!! I'm Jolie, 24, and a free spirit. Welcome to my little corner on the cafe. :D I mostly write poetry, but I've dabbled at stories and I do write my own lyrics for guitar. And.. more..

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