The Veil of Night

The Veil of Night

A Poem by Ramza

Poem I wrote, also on my blog on a site called


In pure darkness I ride
Upon the whispers of lovers
Quicker than the ferocious falcon
Fluttering in the air

Catch me in the corner of your eye
Turn to see but mere shadows
Hidden where the stars cast not their gaze
The moon's glittering rays pass over me

Night's cool breath beckons me
From the deep dark depths of shadows I climb forth
Inhale the intoxicating pleasures of life
I dash forth into the crannies where light frets

This is my existence
My niche among the cluttered lost minds
We all wander the same worn path
Until the Angel's Breath dies

© 2009 Ramza

Author's Note

Please ignore punctuation mistakes as I do not focus on those when writing poetry. However, please point out spelling errors and other pertinent information.

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this is so eloquent!!! and the word flow is so good :) great job!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago

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This was very good. :D

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Added on July 24, 2009



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