Fall

A poem about never giving up, and make something out of your life.

“Fall”

Just when I think I'm about to fall

I remember the times I had it all

To be so blind and not to see

Everyone around needed me

Through the good and through the bad

I remember never to be sad

I will enjoy my life which I cherish

Never again will I let it perish

Author's Note

My second Poem. I hope you guys enjoy. Dont forget to write me reviews and rate please.

Reviews

[Bee Halton]

A lot of determination comes through this poem and determination you need when family and friends depend on you. Yes sometimes it is hard but it's how you said: "I enjoy my life which I cherish ~ never again will I let it perish"

It is interesting that you use rhyme. I have trouble with rhymes and hardly ever use them any more. But maybe I should try again...

[Joseph Aldridge]

Yes you should. Thanks for the review.

[Bee Halton]

you are welcome :-)

[twinkleshine]

This is so uplifting. I love your positive attitude!

[Joseph Aldridge]

Thanks so much!

[Trevor Dion]

I did enjoy reading this.good job

[Broken Soul]

I read this and it immediately reminded me of my life. A lot of times my family depends on me and I'm sure they will in the future. This is a write i can relate with and I'm sure many people out there besides me can also. Nice write.

[Joseph Aldridge]

Thanks.