for Anya

for Anya

A Poem by joshua deathdealer
"

05/2011

"
when I think of you
which is never ceasing 
a flood of emotions run
through the valleys of my heart
my love and responsibilities 
form constant thoughts in my mind
the scars in my demeanor 
is the time lost between us
when I think of you 
I think of us running through
the theme parks, hand in hand
your confidence in me is staggering 
when I think of you
I think of you holding me the whole feature film
and kissing my cheek when sadness arose
you are the princess of my realm
when I think of you 
thoughts of your undying love surface
you love like me, unconditionally 
your person and your beauty flatter me
the joys that explode in my heart
when you dance with me, are heavenly 
the shades of time slow to miracle perfection
it makes me who I am as a man

graced by Gods greatest gift, a soul of an angel

© 2012 joshua deathdealer


Author's Note

joshua deathdealer
Written for my daughter Anya Lynne.



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its so nice to see such a dedicated father who is not afraid, never hesitates to show how much he loves his daughter. this is going to mean more and more to her as she grows older. the love you show her is so important, it really will set the stage for the rest of her life. but i can tell she is very lucky to have you in her life. :)

ps. i love the name anya!

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Ah! This is so sweet and lovely, I am sure your daughter loves this.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's touching,Very good!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I've always heard that men prefer sons to daughters, but my observations indicate a special bond of love between father and daughter, to which this beautiful piece attests. Thank you for sharing such personal and intimate feelings.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was bursting at the seams, overflowing with joy and unconditional love. A powerful and beautiful write. Well done~

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This shows how loving a father can be and how much they will do for that tiny being who is growing up in this world. Also, the life lessons given from this are beautiful.

"our person and your beauty flatter me
the joys that explode in my heart
when you dance with me, are heavenly
the shades of time slow to miracle perfection
Gods greatest gift, a soul of an angel"

Not many fathers do that in this generation but to have this revelation, there are still those who have a heart.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

there is nothing like a father's love

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

First off, I want to say how adorable the picture is. I wanted girls so bad and all I got are boys.

Second. I understand what you are feeling and how the emotions in this poem play a big role n your everyday life. I am glad you were able to sum it up so beautifully.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

its so nice to see such a dedicated father who is not afraid, never hesitates to show how much he loves his daughter. this is going to mean more and more to her as she grows older. the love you show her is so important, it really will set the stage for the rest of her life. but i can tell she is very lucky to have you in her life. :)

ps. i love the name anya!

Posted 12 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Very nice, heartfelt tribute. I like this very much.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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joshua deathdealer

Casket City, FL



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