My Dear Lucile

I lie in bed at night

eyes wide open

thoughts full of you

thoughts of which never to be trite

These thoughts, considered a bijou

of an amazing, lovely woman

my thoughts, my feeling imbue

a soul so anglian

You are now of my desire

eyes nor mind

can't lose sight

You are now queen of my empire

you are stuck in the limelight

feelings for you strongly opined

thoughts keep me writing beyond midnight

thinking of you, as highly devine

I think of you

and how it would feel

my dear lucile

if we were true

Author's Note

trite- wilted
bijou- jewel, carefully worked on
opined- held onto
imbue- inspired

Hope you enjoy :)

Reviews

[FateDictates]

wow this flows so beautifully and shoots straight from the heart...great work...

[A. Amos]

You my friend are a great poet and a marvelous lover, now as you are equiped with deadly combo; reading your work would be journey full of elation.

[Pastel Nix]

Nice writing. Lots of deep feelings behind it. Must be one lucky girl.

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Oh I love this. When I was first reading this poem, I was thinking that this was of you and a girl together in a relationship. Once I started to read a little bit more, I learned that it was to your crush named Lucile (or if that's the cover-up name of the real crush's name). We all have stayed up thinking about someone for hours wondering if they're thinking of us back. Sometimes it can become an obsession. They're all you can possibly think about and life without them seems impossible. I can relate to your writing so much. Great job!

[Sarah]

Really good I like the range of vocabulary in it. It is very powerful :)