anesthetic

you take away
all of my pain
my love and trust
you no longer need to gain

you stopped
all of the hurting
all with your
special way of wording

a natural
pain killer
your love is
my heart filler

you keep me from
some painful screams
you are the one and only
girl of my dreams

thanks to you
it'll never be apart
you are the
anesthetic in my heart

Author's Note

oppinions please

Reviews

[Josh121]

wow i read it like 4 times before i wrote this (possibly going to read it another four after). I love the rhym and rythm of the poem. Loved the lines "a natural pain killer, your love is my pain killer" it speaks to me so deeply. Great no awesome job. You are very good at writing poetry. :)

[Solitary Dreamer]

Love poems are ur thing! Ur great at them:)

[whispereversolightly]

sad write can feel this. like your rhymes ; )

[Steph K]

My favourite line " You are the anesthetic of my heart" Your work is deep with a sense of quirkiness. Enjoyed this very much!

[Cassiopia Summers]

Awe, :) this is so adorable. :) Great write Honey.

[Mikayla Rasmussen]

its really sweet. i love how some people can have that effect on your heart.

[Lee Gupperton]

I love it. Very well written

[Becky C Strukamp]

ditto with DearSweetAgony and TaShandra!! love it...

[DearSweetAgony]

The rhyme scheme is wonderful and it has a wonderful flow to it.
I really like this poem, and I agree with Ta'shandra the last stanza is pure perfection.
Flawless job, just perfect.

[Tasha]

I like it. Its sad and heart-jerking, I loved the last stanza. good job keep up the good work.
♥ Ta'Shandra