Am I worthy?

Am I worthy?

A Poem by Canicus

A queen, a goddess, a flawless perfection

she is...not just that, but more

a beautiful spring flower, luminous moon in the night

such a lovely maiden I adore


never have I met anyone like her

so sweet, cute, caring, compasionate, and lovely

she's truely one of a kind, a special girl

and she is mine, how'd I get so lucky


everything a guy could want, and so much more

she doesn't just stop at perfection, no

she takes it to the stars, way beyond

with intense natural beauty, she does glow


A fool, a mere mortal, an embarrassing fail

I am... nothing compared to her

an unbarable rotted tree, a dark grey cloud in the sky

next to something so bright, I'm just a blur


sometimes I sit and think to myself

why would a girl like you want pitiful me

there are tons of better choices out there

but you decided to set this heart free


you are so amazing, so beautiful, you can't be described by words

nor pictures, because nothing can capture such beauty of yours

one thought runs through my mind

I try to keep it behind closed doors

but Am I worthy?

© 2011 Canicus

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No mere mortal or embarrassing fool are you. Sweet words like yours can never flow from the mouth of such.

Posted 9 Years Ago

according to all of these poems you write, yes you are very worthy dear (:
i think shes rather lucky to be treasured so much all at once.
this isonce again cute and very very very sweet ^^

Posted 9 Years Ago

Oh wow...this is a beautiful poem

Posted 9 Years Ago

You are lucky, this showed extraordinary sweeping range. happy upcoming birthday, very nice sentiments.

Posted 9 Years Ago

This was a beautiful poem. I love the way you described the girl, she seemed really very beautiful.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Lovely poem. The fact that you wonder at your worthiness proves you are completely worthy. I think you're lucky to have each other. Great write

Posted 9 Years Ago


Writing keeps the dream alive

Posted 9 Years Ago

great piece

Posted 9 Years Ago

I liked this poem a lot. You did a nice job. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago

good writing. I liked this poem. with regards.

Posted 9 Years Ago

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