What If

What and if are simple words, but if you put them together you come up with a world of posibilities.

Reviews

[SeihouThePandaHero]

AWESOME!

[Kerri Hart]

thx

[SeihouThePandaHero]

your welcome :D

[Autumn]

Like a short prose, well put together. True, leaves the reader imagine and create the rest of the story. Nice!

[Kerri Hart]

thank u!

[Skye]

So true, so simply written. Wonderful poem. :)

[Malcolm J. Watt]

Again. Succinct, straight to the heart, a clear bullet for confused.

[Kerri Hart]

this may no sound very "poetic" but i have no idea what you meant by that comment :P

[Malcolm J. Watt]

Succinct: Consisting of or characterized by brief and meaningful language. (Funk & Wagnalls Canadian School Dictionary) You've said a lot with very few words and done it clearly without confusion and get to the heart of the issue. My review, though clear to me, obviously isn't as clear as your poem is.

[Kerri Hart]

ahhhhh that makes much more sense thank u