A Burning Soul

A Burning Soul

A Poem by JustWantLove

Indeed, a soul that's filled with gold and pours;
Transparent care shows with each breeze;
In question spends: of whom and whence?
With passion, carelessly of sacrifice,
And no regrets, life still-like stands.


Give all away, hold nothing back;
With words, miraculously chanting;
Explain to those who wonder, and ...
A reason, is to love, truth that it is,
Firmly it holds, nothing is bending.


A soul as deep, as dishes seem,
Give and continue to be;
When one takes all a heart will bleed;
However, graciously keep going ...
[Love and forgive]
With hope keep dreams alive,
A passion lives inside of me,
And glowing ...

© 2009 JustWantLove


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This has incredible insight. As the source of love and light works through the physical being ...

"Give all aay, hold nothing back;
With words, miraculously chanting;
Explain to those who wonder, and ...
A reason, is to love, truth that it is,
Firmly it holds, nothing is bending"

:) Not all have this gift of true awareness. You apparently do.

Beautiful writing! A pleasure to read. Thank you.

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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This has incredible insight. As the source of love and light works through the physical being ...

"Give all aay, hold nothing back;
With words, miraculously chanting;
Explain to those who wonder, and ...
A reason, is to love, truth that it is,
Firmly it holds, nothing is bending"

:) Not all have this gift of true awareness. You apparently do.

Beautiful writing! A pleasure to read. Thank you.

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is so wonderful here. I like he metaphor as the dishes seem. That was pure brillant. This is quite the write.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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JustWantLove
JustWantLove

*bleep*, IL



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* You will either love me, or hate me. Love, being the cataclysmic, overwhelming abundance of passion, hope and enduring. I am not for the fain of heart. Real, daring, blunt .. human. I am..in a.. more..

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