love is a carnival

a little love poem in abcb

A day at the circus

nights at the fair,

swirling on rides

wind through my hair.

Sweet as candy floss,

fresh as spring air.

That what I feel

with this love that we share.

A parade in the sunshine

a birthday surprise!

Christmas mornings,

warm pastel sunrise.

Our love is a carnival

Kaleidoscope lights,

I dust off the glitter

when I kiss you goodnight.

Reviews

[J. K. Beach]

Judy,

You paint such a lovely picture here! Reminds me of riding in the back of a big blue tank of a convertible to a country fair with my college sweetheart; the wind blew through our hair all night long. Very nice!

[Turtle :)]

This is so beautiful and sweet! So enjoyable to read.
Bravo :)
- Turtle

[Brittany Zedalis]

╰☆╮This is so sweet! I truly enjoyed reading it.╰☆╮

[Judy McIntosh]

Thanks for the review, Brittany. I'm happy to be here, cheers judy

[Muse]

Awe this was so fun and so sweet to read.

Our love is a carnival
Kaleidoscope lights,
I dust off the glitter
when I kiss you goodnight.

What a charming way to end your poem...

[Judy McIntosh]

Thanks for the sweet review, it was a fun poem to write. j