Green

Lol

And My chicken wings did burnt
Cos I did ran a bath with
Red wine on the hop
Forgetting to turn that dang hob down
So low
The smoke it burnt mine eyes
Its flavours of smoky lavender
In my hot tub I now soak
I sip mine wine
Till the fire
Traps me bare and white oily naked
To the fireman I say
Close your eyes
And open that damn door
As I hobble to the lawn
So green
And my derier is there
For all to be seen
Fat and oily white against
That stark long grass so green

Reviews

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

So funny Julie! This made my day! Great story and imagery-ha! Clever language. Great form, flow, cadence & theme...if this is a true story- OMG!- lol!! Thanks for the smile this morning!

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

For fun I write this
Lol