please stay

romantic!!!

Please stay

while the roses close up

this moonlit night

please stay with me

whilst the stars

wish upon their every might

please stay and lie with me

whilst the mossies

fly to me and find their bite

please stay and be my friend

whilst the wind gently blows

my skirt up high

please stay and never leave

till morning comes

and next day is done

please stay and

make me breakfast please

please stay and never go

till our time on earth is done

and we are free

Reviews

[Ghost]

Such a romantic poem, makes me long for my love and for me to stay with her... Thank you for sharing the beautiful words

[Merovech]

I like the way you made this in a longing way.

Completely open, one who needs a close friend and defender.

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

If You ever need me I’m here anytime any place🌹

[lessa (kenzie)]

This is so wonderful. it's really nice

[Avia]

Awww, this is nice. 😊. Simply imagining the scene puts a smile on my face.

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Thanks so very much

[Paul Bell]

A guy who makes breakfast, is a stayer.
Hope this time on earth is a long one.

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

ah yes i agree
thank so much Paul for taking the time to read and review

[Coyote Poetry]

A wonderful poem shared dear Julie.
"please stay and
make me breakfast please
please stay and never go
till our time on earth is done
and we are free"
The above lines. Simple actions we shall need and be graceful for.
Coyote

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

thankyou for stopping by in your busy life you write so well, thanks so much. julie.

[Coyote Poetry]

Ain't so busy dear Julie. 8 days off from work. Always a pleasure to read your work.

[andrew mitchell]

a lovely romantic write, always the best scenes from which love may build on.

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

thankyou so much

[Alfred Kukitz]

please has a sweetness that belongs to our lovers.

regards,
al

[jacob erin-cilberto]

reminds me of something in a movie...where the guy would not go home with the woman unless he could have breakfast...he didn't just want sex and a goodbye...but at least the commitment of a morning to come.

j.

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

ohh id love to see that movie
do you remember the name Jacob?
hope you are well, thanks for your review as usual :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I wish I could remember the movie...I just remember that line...sorry.