Morning was broken

Fiction comedy

Morning was broken

She awoke
With the birds
Let out a long lost sigh
And A careful mouthed silent but meaningful yawn
So not to wake him

Smiling she agreed
To herself sensibly that
Another 30 minutes or even seconds
in bed
Would ice her cake today


Rearranged the soft and medium dented pillow mass
In the 5 am dark

But just Under the covers
She smelt
His never forgotten
Silent but meaningful …..!
All unapologetic

Yes his Farts one after the other
In clever unison
The song 🎵 Unforgettable came to mind
Yeh you guessed
What he left her
This fine Saturday Dawn
Of dawns


Separate beds and rooms was high on the agenda in her old age
Wakeful 5am moment

But coffee was now needed
As she threw her covers astray


She heard his blissful snores
From the kitchen
Down the hall

Mén she mouthed
Accidentally Letting out hers as she poured her cuppa
The scent of coffee
Righted all that was wrong

The bird laughed
The cat cried
The dog followed suit
With the man of that house

The sun shone again that day nevertheless

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Seriously comedic and realistic. Was laughing . Using all the senses, we must put up with some things from others.

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Humans are imperfect creatures
Thanks so much again

[Sami Khalil]

I agree wholeheartedly. You are welcome Julie.

[Coyote Poetry]

Yes dear Julie. A farting man isn't sexy no-more. I do like the coffee. I did enjoy the tale in the poetry. You made me smile. Thank you dear friend for sharing the entertaining poetry.
Coyote

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Thanks John it’s a bit crass but anyway 😀

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Julie, thank you for making me laugh. Thoroughly enjoyed and all ended well:) Nicely composed. Hope you are keeping well. All the best.

Chris

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Hi thanks yes well enough hope you are too xx

[hiren]

Hi
I liked the pic mustacheu,
I found the sanjeevani for indigestion, and also snore less sleep.

Guess what 3 to 4 tabs of triphala after dinner before sleep.
Manasamithram tabs for good sound sleep.

But i liked the comedy. I write very well. First time i laughed so much. Cant believe i could laugh on your jokes too.
I thought you make to see like, you singing this song for me
https://youtu.be/t7tTei9K0WY?si=9NScg-3c43UR-Cu7

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Thanks very much appreciated