SISTER

SISTER

A Poem by yashmita13

SISTER

When you are all alone

And feeling down

You need someone

To change your frown

She’ll make you laugh

When you want to cry

You’ll have to tell her the truth

Because she’ll know if you lie

You can count on her

And she can count on you

When she says, “I promise…”

You know that it’s true

She is there by your side

No matter what you do

Your sister’s more than just your family

She your friend through and through  

© 2014 yashmita13


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I can so relate to this. My older sister, (by just 18 months,) and I remain firm friends and nothing will ever break the tie. I wrote a similar poem some time ago about it, and it's a lovely re-affirmation to read of the bond that exists between the two of you.

Beccy.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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A perfect poem for describing a sister's love. Well written :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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yashmita13

8 Years Ago

thank you..
I agree.
"Your sister’s more than just your family
She your friend through and through "
Family is our needed support. Especially a sister. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this. It's so true! My sister is way more than a friend to me. Love love love love this!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


yashmita13

9 Years Ago

thank you so much
Oh how I wish, this was true... In saying that, maybe my family was a dysfunctional one... nice job though. I just don't agree! :D xxx keep it up

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can so relate to this. My older sister, (by just 18 months,) and I remain firm friends and nothing will ever break the tie. I wrote a similar poem some time ago about it, and it's a lovely re-affirmation to read of the bond that exists between the two of you.

Beccy.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautiful relation indeed . good one !

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A reflection of a beautiful, positive connection....... so pleasant to read of, in this day of so much negativity. Nice writing !

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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