My Love...

My Love...

A Poem by Sanjh
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Another poetry on love...

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Look into my eyes,
what do you see?
You'll find love,
deeper than the sea...
You'll be drowned in it,
feeling a wild glee.
You've been searching for love,
follow your heart, it's me...

 

Listen to my voice, 
the song I'm about to sing.
It's incomplete without you,
sounds magical on my six strings...
My voice will shake your heart,
you'll feel the Cupid's sting.
you'll fall for me my dear,
and will fly without any wings...

 

Just look at me,
try to listen to my song.
You'll be spellbound,
with the love so strong...
Have no fear, my dear,
there's nothing wrong.
We'll be together forever,
in the romance, lifelong...

© 2015 Sanjh


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Author's Note

Sanjh
Kindly review it...
Special thanks to Dale for helping me improve it...:)

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"You'll be spell bound,
with the love so strong...
Have no fear my dear,
there's nothing wrong."

Perhaps you may want to apply the following corrections? :)
-spellbound
-Have no fear, my dear

I'm looking forward to reading more of your poems!



Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much Blue. I'll make the changes ASAP...:)
Blue

5 Years Ago

You are welcome!



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Beautifully written and like others earlier said.....you are a master at writing love poems. I would love to continue reading your other works.

Posted 4 Years Ago


mmm wow.....readin ds feels jus like watching a film....a gud film dat z...perfectico

Posted 5 Years Ago


You are a master of love poems. Keep them up.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Lyrical and well written. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 5 Years Ago


"You'll be spell bound,
with the love so strong...
Have no fear my dear,
there's nothing wrong."

Perhaps you may want to apply the following corrections? :)
-spellbound
-Have no fear, my dear

I'm looking forward to reading more of your poems!



Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much Blue. I'll make the changes ASAP...:)
Blue

5 Years Ago

You are welcome!
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SKY
love in all words & love I see into your eyes.
Come lets make a move & join me in twilight...

Glad to have a glimpse of your work.


Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

5 Years Ago

Wonderful lines. I'm happy you liked it. :)
SKY

5 Years Ago

Welcome my friend!
I liked this and it is romantic but also a bit predetermined in the rhyme so keep up the good work

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
It's a beautiful poem well written! Well done! ;)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

5 Years Ago

Thank you Lyndy :)
You are a great writer and I have enjoyed reading your poams, your Poams can change lives and you could make a great and famous poat keep up the good work.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much Hailey. I am replying on 3 months old post but still your review made my day. :)
Look into my eyes,
what do you see?
You'll find love,
deeper than the sea...
You'll be drowned in it,
feeling a wild glee.
You've been searching for love,
follow your heart, it's me...
beautiful...penned with pure heart...:))

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

5 Years Ago

I'm glad you liked it, thanks...:)

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