The wildflowers and you.

The wildflowers and you.

A Poem by Relic's Bare Trees

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The purple violet in your hair blooms for all the days
you spoke with a sparkle in your eye.

Fields of wildflowers dance at your presence.
The moon off the water winks;
cool winds turn warm.

Now, speak to me as if all the flowers were jealous and listening.

© 2019 Relic's Bare Trees


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...Now, speak to me as if all the flowers were jealous and listening...
Your entire poem was a breath of fresh air. I hope many readers find this beautiful poem I especially liked the closing stanza.

Posted 12 Months Ago


Relic's Bare Trees

12 Months Ago

Thank you, Cherrie for your nice comment.
Delightful poetry. A field of wild flowers is poetry itself. I really enjoyed your poetic expression here. Nice work.

Chris

Posted 12 Months Ago


Relic's Bare Trees

12 Months Ago

Thank you, Chris.
Beautiful words accompanied by beautiful scenery, who could ask for more? I love fields of wildflowers. It reminds me of driving through Texas and seeing the flower fields that stretch for miles. I like the line, "the moon off the water winks". Nicely done.

Posted 12 Months Ago


Relic's Bare Trees

12 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind review.
Fabian G. Franklin

12 Months Ago

My pleasure. It's pretty, both the poem and the pic. I'm a lover of beauty in all forms.
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Rye
Aww so very beautiful, I like this write.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Relic's Bare Trees

4 Years Ago

Thank you.
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what an incredible poem, I've never read something so beautiful
your muse is one to hold on to!



Posted 4 Years Ago


Relic's Bare Trees

4 Years Ago

You're very kind, thank you.
"Now, speak to me as if all the flowers were jealous and listening."

Simply beautiful.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Relic's Bare Trees

4 Years Ago

Thank you.
Heaven on earth, expressing loves presences. Beautiful done, my I say.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Relic's Bare Trees

4 Years Ago

Thanks very much.
wow... alot of people read this, and its so simple, you must have alot of other work to back this up

Posted 5 Years Ago


Relic's Bare Trees

5 Years Ago

Back it up?
Hmmm interesting little write here..Your imagery and wording is very strong..this picture a perfert compliment...but what of the feelings??...why am I stumbling on "Now, speak to me..." I almost feel there is a sence of neglect? Is it the flowers that admire this lovely lady...or the "writer" the one jealous that perhaps this lovely lady fails to speak such words to "him?" LOL or I could just be overthinking this lovely piece. Nicely done! You have me pondering every word.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Relic's Bare Trees

5 Years Ago

Hmm? that's a good question. I don't recall what I was thinking at the time I wrote it, but I believ.. read more
Relic's Bare Trees

5 Years Ago

Oh yeah, I was listening to dark side of the moon before I wrote it too. ha
When love is strong and unconditional, it feels like standing at the very summit of the highest mountain and all the world is envious!

Beautifully crafted sentiment, idyllic in words and imagery!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Relic's Bare Trees

5 Years Ago

Thanks very much.

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