Voyeur

Voyeur

A Poem by Relic's Bare Trees

Image result for Looking out her window painting

Will you meet me tonight,
late, at your window?

I need to see you
like a stargazer
sees the skies.

© 2019 Relic's Bare Trees


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Made me chuckle exactly which one are you?

Posted 5 Years Ago


Relic's Bare Trees

5 Years Ago

lol yes and it can be fun to. Only I don't actually do that. I saw it on the news. :)
Onlyme

5 Years Ago

oh yes Tim , I believe you not. wink
Relic's Bare Trees

5 Years Ago

wink wink back.
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Gee
Which one is or are both one....like this

Posted 6 Years Ago


Relic's Bare Trees

6 Years Ago

Thank you .
Dreamers look to the heavens...lovers find heaven in a soul mates gaze.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Relic's Bare Trees

6 Years Ago

Well said. Thank you.
A clandestine affair, it's the suspense and secrecy that makes so exciting!

Yes, what time?

Posted 6 Years Ago


Relic's Bare Trees

6 Years Ago

ha, thanks Tom.
I love this simple yet profound

I interpret this peice as the woman in the picture who has a secret partner that nobody in the outside world knows about. A secret hidden not because of infidelity but because of the passion that they share with one another. She waits to see him in the night to look upon him with love and know that together they have a special bond that nobody can break.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Relic's Bare Trees

7 Years Ago

Wonderful and romantic review. Thank you.
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Reading this my mind comes up with two interpretations, either a stranger reflecting his voyeuristic nightly pleasures in a way that makes him believe he is building up a connection to his victim or a love existing of random dates at night, something like a rather inconsistent love. Anyways, I like the softness and dreaminess about it and the image of night, the night is always awesome poetical content as it's highly inspirational (to me)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Relic's Bare Trees

7 Years Ago

Thank you for the review. Sometimes I write something with one thing in mind (your second interpreta.. read more
V

7 Years Ago

I can relate to your way of thinking and adding the night to my poetic ramblings. I love its presenc.. read more
I see a star writing here

Posted 7 Years Ago


Relic's Bare Trees

7 Years Ago

I appreciate that, thanks.
...it reads like moonlight...beautiful brevity!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Relic's Bare Trees

7 Years Ago

Thanks Kelly.
So simple yet so adorable and sweet..... how just a glimpse of the one you love can keep you satisfied...

loved the below lines

I need to see you,
like a stargazer
sees the skies.

i can relate it , the one who cannot be reached or you cant have you still like to see them.... their existence means so much to you.. thanks for sharing the beautiful creation..

Posted 7 Years Ago


Relic's Bare Trees

7 Years Ago

Thanks for a great interpretation.
sweet piece. the poet is content to just watch from afar just like a stargazer. good comparison.

nice one, Rain.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Relic's Bare Trees

8 Years Ago

Thank you Woody.

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Added on October 19, 2014
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