Voyeur

Will you meet me tonight,

late, at your window?

I need to see you

like a stargazer

sees the skies.

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

A beautiful piece, filled with longing -- shades of missing someone who has passed, or perhaps just someone the speaker cannot attain, like the stars ...

[Relic's Bare Trees]

Thank you for your interpretation.

[barleygirl]

Your illusive message could pertain to humans longing in the flesh . . . but the remarkable part is that it can also describe a longing for someone (or a pet) that's departed this earthly realm, since we often stand at the window to the hereafter with longing. Another idea sparked is standing at the window of someone we can't reach for some reason . . . so many meanings in your simple words.

[Relic's Bare Trees]

Thank you for an interesting review.

[Chris]

THAT was a niiiiccce flow to listen to... softly.

[B]

Sweet

so romantic .....................

[Tales Of A Dreamer]

Seems rather subliminal, but it still is romantic.

[RomaJ]

Terrifying but eloquently done.100...:)

[Relic's Bare Trees]

Thank you.

[RomaJ]

You're welcome

[Willard Wells]

Romeo and Juliet came to mind first, but then the gazing at the stars to give you focus on the love that is in your heart, but not with you at that moment. It has a true love feel to it. Thank you for sharing.

[Relic's Bare Trees]

Thanks very much for the review Willard.

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

cute poem, has the essence it need...we all like to be stargazers. Glad you shared this. :) Rudi

[Relic's Bare Trees]

Thanks for reading Rudi.

[Zahra]

Cute and simple.
I need to see you
to watch you
like a stargazer
watches the skies

[Relic's Bare Trees]

Thanks very much for reading Zahra.

[Zahra]

you're welcome. :)