My Love...

Another poetry on love...

Look into my eyes,
what do you see?
You'll find love,
deeper than the sea...
You'll be drowned in it,
feeling a wild glee.
You've been searching for love,
follow your heart, it's me...

 

Listen to my voice, 
the song I'm about to sing.
It's incomplete without you,
sounds magical on my six strings...
My voice will shake your heart,
you'll feel the Cupid's sting.
you'll fall for me my dear,
and will fly without any wings...

 

Just look at me,
try to listen to my song.
You'll be spellbound,
with the love so strong...
Have no fear, my dear,
there's nothing wrong.
We'll be together forever,
in the romance, lifelong...

Author's Note

Kindly review it...
Special thanks to Dale for helping me improve it...:)

Reviews

[Blue]

"You'll be spell bound,
with the love so strong...
Have no fear my dear,
there's nothing wrong."

Perhaps you may want to apply the following corrections? :)
-spellbound
-Have no fear, my dear

I'm looking forward to reading more of your poems!

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much Blue. I'll make the changes ASAP...:)

[Blue]

You are welcome!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

wow!!!
awesome song!!!
loved it!!!
:)

[Sanjh]

Thanks brother...:)

[Misha]

What a love song....loved it....in fact it really makes one fall in love all over again

[Sanjh]

Lol, I'll surely put it to test someday, Thanks Misha...:)

[Misha]

Ur welcome

[M.A.Rathore]

This is so romantic poem that I would like to say you are a great lover who feels the real love in the heart that is rarely found though it is simple and emotional outbust of passionate flow. Your poem is superbly written in the well proportion that attracts the attention of each and every reader. You words are so pure that it is a bewitching spell on my mind.
Thanks for sharing so nice a poem like this!

[Sanjh]

thank you so much...:)

[M.A.Rathore]

Welcome always....

[R Smith]

a very good love song, are you putting it to music? seems to me it has potential to become a special song for lovers and that's always guaranteed success :)

[Sanjh]

Yes Richard, I'm planning on putting it to music and also I am working on the chorus part to make it a complete song. Thank you so much for appreciating...:)

[Tiana]

I enjoyed your poem very much. Wonderfully written

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much...:)

[Brooke M.]

Very nice. Your words fit together perfectly.

[Sanjh]

I'm glad you liked it Brooke, thank you so much...:)

[P]

Very inspirational, something about the love you share makes it so passionate and deep. Nice job!

[Sanjh]

Thank you so much Paloma...:)

[Skai Rain]

Very sweet. I loved it :)

[Sanjh]

Thank you for appreciating Brit...:)

[Lenah Mehzabin]

very nice and especially the lines " look into my eyes ""
Listen to my voice, " it holds a deep expression .well written i m already reading it 3rd tym ! :)

[Sanjh]

thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it...:)

[Cool Girl]

I really like it! Great job:)

[Sanjh]

thank you so much...:)

[Cool Girl]

You're welcome:)