Moonlight...

Moonlight...

A Poem by Sanjh
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A feeling long suppressed...

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Sitting at the window,
I saw the full moon tonight.
It felt beautiful than ever,
Showering bright white light...

There was some sadness in it,
It felt like the moon is crying.
I think the moon was talking to me,
But why was he shying...?

The moonlight touched my face,
Reminding me of someone very special.
A tear rolled out of my eyes,
And head went to nestle...

All the emotions suppressed,
Came out through my eyes.
Just looking at the moon,
My tears went on rise...

Maybe she too was looking at the moon,
Maybe she was also crying.
My heart was pounding so fast,
I felt like I'm dying...

All the times when we were together,
Kept on flashing in my mind.
My heart filled with her love,
And now it was not confined...

The moonlight told me,
How much she misses me.
There are tears in her eyes,
And she is making this plea...

"Please come back to me,
Let's try to work things out..."
My mind was confused,
But the heart wanted to shout...

I could see her face on the moon,
She was in front of my sight.
The moon was just a messenger,
And message, was the moonlight...

© 2014 Sanjh


Author's Note

Sanjh
Got the idea for this poem while returning late at night from work. Hope you'd enjoy...thank you...:)

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Well written and delivered!
I have felt this feeling before as if my special someone and I were longing
for one another under the same moon at the same time:(
I really enjoyed this piece and pray that you and yours work things out!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much James. :)



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I love this:) they emotions and writing is beautiful and the end perfect. It's sweet but sad. Very wonderful read

Posted 6 Years Ago


I love how you can just sit and watch the moon...You can just see how much light it can really spread in the darkness. I love to watch it just glow in the dark....Great work on this writing! Keep writing!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Great job!! I could feel the emotions, especially since i can relate, thanks for sharing! I enjoyed reading this.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Faith, I'm glad you liked it. :)
Well written and delivered!
I have felt this feeling before as if my special someone and I were longing
for one another under the same moon at the same time:(
I really enjoyed this piece and pray that you and yours work things out!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much James. :)
I really love this poem! It's a good one! :D

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

6 Years Ago

Thank you for appreciating Lyndy. :)
This made me cry, but a beautiful poam if I ever did see one, keep up the good work and don't let anything take you down ever.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Hailey...:)
Frankly, I couldn't figure where the poem started and where it ended. All because I was lost in its charm, lost in the story so created. So beautiful, so subtle the piece just flows. Mindblowing. Salute.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Penny...:)
The moonlight touched my face,
Reminding me of someone very special.
A tear rolled out of my eyes,
And head went to nestle....

I could see her face on the moon,
She was in front of my sight.
The moon was just a messenger,
And message, was the moonlight...
wow...beauty.................:))

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

6 Years Ago

Thanks for appreciating Shivedita...:)
I have always had an obsession with the moon. How bright and big it could look in the sky, and its glow bathing the Earth. You captured its essence beautifully. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

6 Years Ago

I'm glad you liked iy Haley, thank you...:)
very nice poem. i like your style. Keep up the good work

P.S. If you need me to review any of your work just tell me

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Natalie

6 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and thanks for your offer! :)

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