Blanket

Blanket

A Poem by julius_wyann
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A short poem riddled with metaphors. Or a metaphor. You decide

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Covering me for comfort 
Keeping me warm 
Peace found at last 

I search all day 
For what can be found at home 
The real comfort of the blanket
Is in finally finding your soul

Live life and enjoy 

© 2021 julius_wyann


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What I love about your message: (1) uniquely stated about relatable life . . . (2) could refer to god's love, self-love, whatever one's medication from despair . . . (3) as a statement about god's love, I prefer seeing this presented as a comfy blanket (like you did) rather than as something lofty & looking down upon us. I've always felt about god as one feels about an everyday best friend, which is the vibe I get from your poem (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Wow, this is really wonderful, I enjoyed this write a lot

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

julius_wyann

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you! I appreciate the feedback. This is definitely some of my best work to date
What I love about your message: (1) uniquely stated about relatable life . . . (2) could refer to god's love, self-love, whatever one's medication from despair . . . (3) as a statement about god's love, I prefer seeing this presented as a comfy blanket (like you did) rather than as something lofty & looking down upon us. I've always felt about god as one feels about an everyday best friend, which is the vibe I get from your poem (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I translate this one as a metaphor for a Higher Power. It is what we really seek, but ironically, we do so in all the wrong places. For it was within us from the start.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

julius_wyann

2 Weeks Ago

Great review! Pretty much what I was going for but you put into different words beautifully. Thank y.. read more

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