Change of Heart

It was pure and true.

It was once given to you.

At one time it only knew happiness.

But you turned it into agonizing sadness.

Now it's hardened and won't open to anyone.

It was tattered and divided when you were done.

It's probably a waste to tell you this is about my heart.

You took advantage of a once gentle soul from the start.

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Shadows of Sight]

If you step back from the screan and squint your eyes, it kinda looks like a beehive! And you know that in there is honey. One of the many foods of the Gods! Plus it is sweet! Thus i would have to say that even though you feel as if your heart is empty, I would disagree. I think there is still a great Sweetness about you, I have seen that in your reviews, and The gods must surely value your talent! :)
Great Poem!
Just my weird View huh? he he :)

[RareRed]

Love it....seems to so accuretly portray what I've felt just recently in my own heart. Thanks for a great read!

[Damian Alan Gray]

Many poets are poets because they suffer greatly when their hearts are crushed. Thus, poets often seem to be the most morose people on earth but they are teaching the world a lesson in verse. It's actually from those feelings of morbidity that the rest of the world can discover how to feel. So, thank god for poets, and thank god for you and your words.
This particular piece is wonderfully crafted! Thanks for the read.

[Red_Queen]

Absolutly loved the poem and how the words shapped out in the end. Was that intentional?

The only problem i had with it was it was waaaayyy tooo small i can barely read it.




xoxoxoxoxo

-Queenie-