The comedy

I believe this poem make you laugh

It is  not me who is writing,

it is my computer on which I am typing,

let me write let me paste,

give some time to have some taste,

of the dish which is in front of me,

before my momy stop me,

the world is all over round ,

reviews cannot be easily found,

no one here to see my stuff ,

my age is now 60 plus.

The reason behind writing it in blue,

The age I mention is not true,

and blue is rhyming word of true

Author's Note

thanks you for smiling

Reviews

[drob]

You made me smile and that is worth wonderful

[Manasa.L]

Hey that's really nice, I loved the last lines very funny. Good rhyming.

[TheUnrulyWriter]

Haha this poem is great! I love how you managed to make something visual rhyme; that's very clever!!

[barleygirl]

Here's what I'm getting from your beginning lines: If my writing is good, I did it . . . If it's NOT good, the computer did it! *smile* I like to make people smile so I totally understand your expressions, wanting to lighten up the mood here & show us what makes you smile. This world is too downtrodden to stay serious . . . a laugh is much needed! (((HUGS)))

[writ rajat]

thanks dear barley

[duff]

Comedy is not easy by any means and you found that vein here in splendid form. Nice work:)

[writ rajat]

nice hear from you legends's review

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

It's not you it's your computer lol. Nice poem. You have what is true for so many writers, regarding reviews.

[writ rajat]

Thanks you so much dear

[Surya]

Yep it added smile.....was good..:)

[writ rajat]

Review in return of review nice

[Surya]

I cant ignore any help offered to me, That's it...:)

[Willard Wells]

good words to bring a smile. You can never go wrong with a smile. Thanks,

[gabrielle]

Lol. This is funny! You got talent in making people smile :) :) :)

[writ rajat]

thanks you

[Perkele.7885]

Writ, you are making fun of me. I am 65 you see, is your poem then not making fun of me? I like blue, it is my favorite color and I am to old now to find another and even though the world is round, maybe I can find a review in the lost and found! A nice write, young man!