Dreams

Dreams are as delicate as petals,

Totally beyond my reach!

When i open my dreamy eyes,

My helpless soul always cries.

Each tear has its own story,

Enveloping darkness and no glory!

I try to gather them but in vain,

They get scattered leaving only pain.

Listen- my beloved,

Walk slowly as you walk on them.

You are my only desire-my only hope,

Longing for immense love and care,

My restless heart wanders here and there.

Yes-you just touched me- you are here!

Whilst I realized it was a dream again,

One more tear....

Reviews

[Clayton Bardwell]

To dream but not in vain, would that not relieve the pain? I think not.

Beautiful imagery.

[Kajal Gulabani]

Thank you so much :)

[Sola]

A bit odd, but who am I to judge on that, I think it's an interesting choice in subject matter, and you have strong voice, however I am the kind of person that care that the third line contains an un-capatalized "I".