Robo-Tick Age

Robo-Tick Age

A Poem by Kajal Gulabani

Robo-tick age 

As I ponder over the worldly power
 My creative horses run all over

Bingo! If babies were born in a mechanised cot
Cheers! women would hardly opt for a diet slot

Cars would ramp-walk with flashy controllers
How about a rendezvous on cosmic stroller?

Heart would pump through cellular vibes
O'Brain, physics will pour thou with life

Sigh! Who is the parent of 'love' in them all ? 
Who is the creator of 'soul' in the techno brawl ? 
Can science topple over the natural flavours?
Can humanity be splashed in these robotic endeavours? 

© 2013 Kajal Gulabani


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Good questions in the poem. I pray science leave babies making to the mama's. Love for child is precious and wonderful. A interesting poem. Government and science need to leave the birth of children alone. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


Kajal Gulabani

7 Years Ago

Th

So damn true.. Thanks.
i agree with the message of your poem here. Science may have made our lives easier and will continue to do so but there is an equally dangerous chance that we ourselves can turn into robots.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Kajal Gulabani

7 Years Ago

Yess.. Let's hope for the best. Thanks for the review.
Nicely written read for yes this world has turned to a robotic sense for mechanics robotics can never in my opinion over take the mechanics of all things natural like creating life, feelings of emotion, compassion, the warm touch of another and so on and so on as always keep writing fellow writer. You raised some good things here.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Kajal Gulabani

7 Years Ago

Thank you kelvin :)
kelvin

7 Years Ago

You're very welcome
interesting writing style and very thought provoking.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Kajal Gulabani

7 Years Ago

Thank you.
Nice question Kajal. Well set out in verse that challenges us to contemplate how far we go with technology. Today the IPad tomorrow the Matrix!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Kajal Gulabani

7 Years Ago

Indeed John.. Thank yous :)
makes you think and wonder
thank you for sharing

Posted 7 Years Ago


Kajal Gulabani

7 Years Ago

Many thanks
that is really mind provoking poem. i dont know to where again would technology lead us after all of that..
very nicely penned..

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kajal Gulabani

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much
khalid

7 Years Ago

ur welcome
Is this happenning already? this brings up some interesting thoughts and i love the way youve presented it

Posted 7 Years Ago


Kajal Gulabani

7 Years Ago

Thank you Leigh.. Received the books. Thanks :)
Leigh

7 Years Ago

Wow that took a while, so glad you got them :-)
Robots are awesome

Posted 7 Years Ago


Kajal Gulabani

7 Years Ago

Yessss

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Kajal Gulabani
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Ahmedabad, Shilaj, India



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